Music Video Rough Cut Feedback

Here is some feedback of the rough cut of my music video from Abel.

I learned that the way the audio has been cut in the intro sequence doesn't work too well. There was no way around this unless I cut out the intro altogether, which I didn't want to do. He discussed to keep the music flowing throughout instead of cutting to the frames in the dance studio at the beginning, however this would have greatly reduced the time I had to portray what is going on.

Additionally, Abel suggests to include an establishing shot of the theatre, which I would have done if I had more time.