Another interesting and well written case study. Expand more on editing and consider using stills to illustrate your analysis more clearly. Some interesting thoughts on ideas you could use / subvert in your own work. Vanessa
Thank you for the feedback. I have added an extra paragraph on editing in my analysis and have dotted some stills around.
You have added some analysis on editing now and the stills are helpful
Another interesting and well written case study. Expand more on editing and consider using stills to illustrate your analysis more clearly. Some interesting thoughts on ideas you could use / subvert in your own work. Vanessa
ReplyDeleteThank you for the feedback. I have added an extra paragraph on editing in my analysis and have dotted some stills around.
DeleteYou have added some analysis on editing now and the stills are helpful
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